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Thursday, March 29, 2018

The Tunnel


Today for writing we did a setting introduction. Doing setting introduction you need to add dialogue to make it interesting. 

3 comments:

  1. Hi Carl, my name is Payton I am a year 6 from Paihia School. I like your descriptive words about the Tunnel, it really paints a pictures in my head. Keep up the great work Carl.

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  2. Thank you for your comment Payton I really appreciate it!

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  3. Hi Carl, I really like your interesting work. Thing I like about it is that you have showed me that what I should do while I am writing. Your writing has hooked me in and makes me want to read more and more. Keep up the work!

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